tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3015945955364811721.post1279804772580403331..comments2023-10-24T08:01:22.850-07:00Comments on LOsa's Blog: Of Mice and Men- First EssayLOsa.Linihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08446850953594355380noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3015945955364811721.post-59432183357017136252009-05-21T01:57:02.076-07:002009-05-21T01:57:02.076-07:00Merit. Just. A few fluency errors that could be im...Merit. Just. A few fluency errors that could be improved. Try reading it aloud. Your structure is spot on Losalini! Well done. Try to ensure your introduction is ver clear, maybe try to be even more direct in your link to the question. Make sure you quotes don't outway the explanations. Good work!Claire Amoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10579894985450127837noreply@blogger.com